Rough cut 1 con

The first con i discovered was the opening. There was no build up to it, it was straight into main joke. There needed to be an establishing shot of it.

The second con was the font and colour. The font did not look correct atotal. The font actually gave the feel that the video was more creepy and a little perverse. This is not the tone I wanted to go for. It needed to be fun and interesting.

Another there wasn't much to give it an e4 feel. I needed to use more purple in the shot to keep true with the e4 branding

Finally the promo needed a good end shot.